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I wrote this when I was going through a very dark chapter in my life. I found it again yesterday and I, dunno, I guess I just wanted to share it with the world. Please write below to see how you like it. Thanks 
Roads
It’s a fork. There’s a fork in the roads. Both are enveloped in a thick fog, I can’t see where they end, or what they’re like. One’s bumpy, one isn’t. I don’t know which one to take. I’m tired, dreary, fatigued right now. Choosing paths doesn’t seem too important right now. I stumble onto one, but the moment my shoes crunch against the gravel, the fog clears. I see pain, mistrust, greed, torture. Horrified, I turn back, but the gate is locked. Little fleas nibble away at my feet, forcing me to walk. I have no option but to walk. Carcasses of other unfortunate travelers litter the ground. I witness terrible, terrible things. After walking for goodness knows how long, I’m confronted by my once confidante. He is angered and thrashes me, bruises me, breaks me down. Then he drags me up and beats me again till I can barely breathe.
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This is great, it really set the scene for me and i had a clear picture in my head while reading which some authors can struggle to do, the only thing i would say is set the scene just a little more, what can you see, hear, smell etc. But thats only if you'll carry on writing maybe into a book or a short story, i'd love to see more of your work 
Also, it sets the mood very well, like i can tell you've been through a tough time even without you telling me. I struggle to find books that i can really see in my head, that set the scene well, and this little piece of writing did just that! Keep it up, id love to see more 
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Thanks 
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Nice post shared...
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I hope that isnt sarcasm 
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thats nice 
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i loved it 
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