something in this edit don't like me. Can anybody help me?

MiseryNightshade wrote:

mizzb97 wrote:

I started Editing a few months back, but couldnt because I didnt have a working computer for a while. Any constructive critcism would be great. :-) [Also tutorials, tips, etc.]
http://photo.missbimbo.com/3/1424/moy/1138827.jpg

I love the shape and design, I just think it needs darker outlines, darker shadows and some more highlights.

Thanks for the critique, Im gonna try to re-edit the whole dress.

Sarah 7 wrote:

mizzb97 wrote:

I started Editing a few months back, but couldnt because I didnt have a working computer for a while. Any constructive critcism would be great. :-) [Also tutorials, tips, etc.]
http://photo.missbimbo.com/3/1424/moy/1138827.jpg

What program did you use?

GIMP, but I'm gonna try to re-edit on PAINT.NET.

Dwelt wrote:

missyfrutillitas wrote:

something in this edit don't like me. Can anybody help me?
http://i1101.photobucket.com/albums/g43 … lolita.png

I think the dress needs more shading where the pattern is (like under the bust). Without it, it looks a little flat. Also maybe a little shading right under the dress to show a shadow on her skin. Other then that I think it's great! I love the style.

i added more shadows and i'm happy whit this, thank you.

missyfrutillitas wrote:

Dwelt wrote:

missyfrutillitas wrote:

something in this edit don't like me. Can anybody help me?
http://i1101.photobucket.com/albums/g43 … lolita.png

I think the dress needs more shading where the pattern is (like under the bust). Without it, it looks a little flat. Also maybe a little shading right under the dress to show a shadow on her skin. Other then that I think it's great! I love the style.

i added more shadows and i'm happy whit this, thank you.

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/2716 … lolita.png

Well its amazing !! <3 <3 <3

Dwelt wrote:

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n29/ … ress-1.png

I'm not really happy with this.

Maybe because of the breast?It looks a bit strange.I know that you made it just like the pose, but try to change it a bic And the voil above the dress should be a little bit longer.Not longer than the dress.
But I like it

opinions on these poses please
(lines and shading are off but they get adjusted when I'm ready)

Last edited by oogie (05-22-2011 01:49)

oogie wrote:

opinions on these poses please
(lines and shading are off but they get adjusted when I'm ready)
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-8gCfX_tMcjI/T … rmaids.png
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-bqrZI6C4-zI/T … rmaid2.png
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-BKqiY8Zqy8g/T … type+2.png

that poses are gorgeous, all of them, if i have to do a critique i say the second  is a litle confuse to me, have  too much lines, but is gorgeous too.

a new pose, i have some problems with her left arm and her boobies.i'm not  completely happy with this

@oogie
I see some areas that need some fixing up, but not much. great pose ideas.
The top pose, the bimbo on the left, her arm looks like it's bending at an unnatural angle, maybe make her arm straighter or slightly angled in the opposite direction. The bimbo on the right, it looks like part of her arm is missing between the outer arm and the breasts.
and the shoulders on poses 1 and 2 need to be rounder.
That's all I see that needs improving.

Pose:MM2007
Hair:Maynababy
i cant remember how did the jewelry sorry

What do you think about my version of Gaga`s hair and make-up?

Scarletcore wrote:

What do you think about my version of Gaga`s hair and make-up?
http://photo.missbimbo.com/3/1427/moy/1141329.jpg
http://photo.missbimbo.com/3/1427/moy/1141330.jpg

i'm in love of your hair

i usually do straight hairs but i wanted to try curly hair atleast and this was what i created

tell me what you think
link to bigger img
http://i703.photobucket.com/albums/ww35 … hair17.png


i dont know whats wrong with me but this is the 5th time that i forgot to post the pic!

Last edited by wachout (05-25-2011 00:04)