Idril92 wrote:

dyenutzZz96 wrote:

Idril92 wrote:

This is very nice, what I would suggest first of all is a darker outline for the trousers and the skirt It gives a lot more "realism"
Shading is pretty good, maybe you could emprove a little bit on the breast, but it's ok
Another thing I'd say, try to cover all the skin - on the legs for example, there are some pieces missing And, always talking about trousers, the contours are a bit irregular ^_^
Plus, this is not necessary, but if you want you can add some highlights
Anyway you're doing great, just a bit of practice and you'll be perfect

P.s. What program do you use?

uhm, maybe something like this?
http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/7748/bimbo0.png

I've redrawn it Tell me whet do you think
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af2 … i/fg-1.png

Now the shading is perfect
I like it ^_^ The only thing I'd suggest now is the outline of the shirt
Why don't you try to change it with a different colour? I'd suggest a dark green, darker than the colour you used for the shadows Like Dollphane does on his creations ^_^ This one looks a bit strange to me, but probably it's only a my opinion, so don't worry
You're doing a great job anyway

Ok,this is the third version of this outfit

Here is my last edit , i just finished it . I am proud with it but i think i can improve it and i want if you can to tell me what i have to do to improve this edit and if you don`t like something or is something what you would to add to this edit please just tell me and i will try to do it .

what do you think of my new edit? 

Last edited by sabrinitiza (04-24-2010 22:20)

Misholina wrote:

Angel0Luv0Joy0 wrote:

I've been at editing for a month or two..
I'm sure you can tell that my shoes are way off...

http://photo.missbimbo.com/3/1032/moy/824868.jpg

Pose by MackiesMommy2007

Sure it looks GOOD, but I want to make it GREAT!

Your edit does look good. You have patience and you added a lot of details to it.
You just need to add more lights and shadows to make it more realistic.

Here is my graphic explanation:

http://i806.photobucket.com/albums/yy34 … 824868.png

FIRST thing you need to do - you need to determine on which side the lights should be. You added lights on your edit like sun shines from the front. But if you look at the base her light half of the head is darker - that means that light should fall from the left side.
On the right drawing I tried to explain to you where you should place your shadowes and lights. White colour is where the ligther colors should be and red is for the shadows.
Hope I was not too confusing.
As I said you could always be more detailed, I did this rather quickly.

Also I see that you add lights like transparent white lines - you should blur them a little so they blend more with the outfit....

As for the SHOES I tried to improve them. They are my weal point too. ^_^ I changed how edge of the shoes bottoms is visible. It's all the matter of perspective. The closer the part of the shoe is, more of the edge is visible... And also I added visible heal for one shoe... Somehoe it felt right that way to me...

Hope I helped a little

It has helped, thank you!  I never really had a point of light, I just knew there were supposed to me shadows and highlights... This had helped alot, thank you!

rebela5 wrote:

Hey!
I did a new edit,and it` doesn`t come out what i would like to comee!!
http://photo.missbimbo.com/3/1033/gd/825711.jpg
What I did wrong?

Great try hon I think what makes it look off is because there is no light and shadows it is just more a shape with a pattern .. you have sharp angles too ..round the edges a bit more.. it will look more like you wanted.

kcpooh13 wrote:

girl555 wrote:

Hi! Here are some of my edits.. I'm still new to editing.. :{

http://i43.tinypic.com/mw4aog.jpg http://i39.tinypic.com/68sbj9.jpg http://i43.tinypic.com/20fc7l.jpg http://i40.tinypic.com/p8u43.jpg

:S Please tell me what do you think, becouse I really want to improve in editing..

These are all great hon.. I would suggest to work more on your shadows and light.. maybe some texture on the blue dress.
Great job hon!!

Thanks!    I will try adding more shadows next time ^^

Idril92 wrote:

dyenutzZz96 wrote:

Idril92 wrote:

Now the shading is perfect
I like it ^_^ The only thing I'd suggest now is the outline of the shirt
Why don't you try to change it with a different colour? I'd suggest a dark green, darker than the colour you used for the shadows Like Dollphane does on his creations ^_^ This one looks a bit strange to me, but probably it's only a my opinion, so don't worry
You're doing a great job anyway

Ok,this is the third version of this outfit
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af2 … tzi/sf.png

Ok, now it's perfect
Just remember, each edit you do, to outline it in darker colour than the colour you used for the shadows ^_^
And, I don't know if you already do it, but I always suggest it: work a lot on levels, each part of the dress/outfit has to be on a separate level, so it's easier for you to make changes ^_^

Thank you I used almost 4 layers for this one.I will use your advices in my next edits

Bar8ie wrote:

Angel0Luv0Joy0 wrote:

I've been at editing for a month or two..
I'm sure you can tell that my shoes are way off...

http://photo.missbimbo.com/3/1032/moy/824868.jpg

Pose by MackiesMommy2007

Sure it looks GOOD, but I want to make it GREAT!

http://i371.photobucket.com/albums/oo15 … 824868.jpg

Thanks so much! I think I'm use the one pixel, but it looks very choppy.

kcpooh13 wrote:

rebela5 wrote:

Hey!
I did a new edit,and it` doesn`t come out what i would like to comee!!
http://photo.missbimbo.com/3/1033/gd/825711.jpg
What I did wrong?

Great try hon I think what makes it look off is because there is no light and shadows it is just more a shape with a pattern .. you have sharp angles too ..round the edges a bit more.. it will look more like you wanted.

oK,thank you!!

mariahdianacarey wrote:

http://photo.missbimbo.com/3/1034/moy/827013.jpg

Pose by AM.

I've been trying to do shading like Dollphane Please tell what you think etc xD

I love your edits, they are beautiful, I love how clean they look and you really have the Dollphane shading down pat, maybe just a little darker on the shading to give it more depth, but other than that, wow!

mariahdianacarey wrote:

MackiesMommy2007 wrote:

mariahdianacarey wrote:

http://photo.missbimbo.com/3/1034/moy/827013.jpg

Pose by AM.

I've been trying to do shading like Dollphane Please tell what you think etc xD

I love your edits, they are beautiful, I love how clean they look and you really have the Dollphane shading down pat, maybe just a little darker on the shading to give it more depth, but other than that, wow!

Thanks!  I know you know it BUT Your edits are stunning!

Thanks for the advice Alisha, I'll defo try that when I get a chance! Too much work 

Thanks Glad I could help.

I know my editing needs some improving. Some days are good, some days not so much, lol!

C&C?

Love the flow of your dress in this one and the color you chose. What I did was just cleaned it up a bit. It looks like when you blur your shadows, that the blur spills out. I also outlined the dress with a darker turquoise and about size 1 line and added highlights and shading at the bottom, under her breasts and around the curve of the waist.

Hope you don't mind